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A very short Quip story you might need a coffee before you start.or maybe just pick up a horse shoe for good luck  if you suvive the story.

Go on if you dare, Many hrs through the night creepers and crawlers of the mind goes either well for you or may be alone, but there is always something watching you. You look out the window for one second.then a howl of the wind under the door someone is after you you hear crys of twitch then the window shakes,the door creaks, you stop writing then you let out a scream.! You start shaking, twitch again  then you struggle to look at the mirror your face is white, you are pulsating with fear,then you know it’s the grim reaper. Then the door swings open and a dark figure walks yelped out and fall to the ground,like a whimpering dog, then it spoke

why did you not call me, how many times I have told you to call me son.

you realise who it is

mother how many times I have told you let me know when you are coming, and why are you here?

She replies

so then sweetheart struggling to pay the rent are we.? You have to do something for me, if you don’t do this for me,this time,you will be dead by tomorrow morning, I never loved your father, always sobbing not really a man I once loved, not very strong always a goody goody and you know son your next on the hit list, you do as your told.your life will be spared.

then in a blink of an eye, something plunged through her body a sword of magic light, the escalating sound 🔊 through her dark withering body, the mother falls to the ground and yells out and screams.

ahhhh ! How can it be ? The mother turns to sand and the howling wind blows the sand through the night air lost for ever

then you are there nervous and whimpering you look out the door something killed her mother, for one moment you had a tear as you look through the air, lying on the floor you see a shooting  star.

but it was strange it was coming straight for him, but felt warm and loved, and knew it was his mother empowering ways and knew from the heart he was going to die but he had no fear. Then it came through the door 🚪

Then woke up got out of bed, it was only a dream,for the first time looking around of the surroundings and felt everything was just a dream,

Then felt happy then a knock on the door, it was strange no one ever knocked on the door, the door opened

hi son it’s good to see you,

surprisinly spoke with sheer delight

Dad you died six years ago, you look good is this another dream where is mother.?

Dont worry about her.

The father and his son were together at last and lived on for all eternity that one day every living thing on this planet will die for the second coming of Christ is near,all living things will be judged and returned to the soil and for those who do the greater Good and do Good deeds will live an immortal life, for many centuries to come

the moral of this story is to bring back the greater good so we all can live an immortal life, that is why the bible was written for Humankind to survive against all odds that is stacked up against us.each working day and to continue on living that choice is up to you,the moral of the bible is about the living and the dead. Even the Egyptians had a book the book of the dead 💀 and there is another book,the book of life. What side you are on is entirely up to you goodbye and good night until then,just be careful if you hear someone knock three times on the door 🚪


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Jimmy's Den

I am a research scientist, ahead of mainstream, and ahead of my times.with continuous ideas,I love digging into the unknown to the mysterious universe and superstition.function of society and behaviour of people.and why forbidden knowledge must be remain hidden at all cost and for a reason.i don't like to trivialise, but find a reasonable explanation to get the heart of the truth to our unatural universe behaviour and life in general, life is not always logic there is always that unknown reason. Media short films leading roles to supporting roles,which one stood out the most. Twenty epidodes of an extra with Neighbours including a guest role which started the ball rolling for me.and moved on with Wordpress and imbdpro,Pinterest and imbd,as well casting frontier,so buckle up and take a look on my blog sit back with a cofee and emjoy the read

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